Surprise!

Posted on 09 Nov 2025 @ 1:22am by Lieutenant Margeurite "Maggie" LeFebvre & Lieutenant JG Todd Hewitt

4,581 words; about a 23 minute read

Mission: General Sim Postings
Location: Station Holodeck, 07
Timeline: Current

[ON]

Personal Log: Ensign Todd Hewitt, USS Tomcat

I keep tripping over my meditation rug, my nerves buzzing with excitement because Maggie LeFebvre—Lieutenant, fighter pilot, and such a dazzling helmsman—has agreed to spend station leave with me tonight! Even though I' m a century old, I' m still a kid by El Aurian standards, and humans like Maggie, with her heart- skipping smile, are a delightful mystery to me. We' re “going steady,” but I still feel a bit clueless about what that really means. For tonight, I' m aiming to impress her with a fun holodeck surprise: a Risian Pleasure Planet Festival! I just hope I don' t accidentally call her “Lieutenant” during our date.
“Computer, send message to LT JG LeFebvre.”

“Sent.”

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Holodeck Program: Risian Festival Extravaganza
Submitted by: Ensign Todd Hewitt

Maggie,

I'm feeling a bit shy about saying this aloud, so here' s a fun plan for tonight. I programmed a Risian beach festival for us… We' ll arrive just as the sun sets, painting the sky in beautiful pinks and purples, with glowing sand beneath our feet (is that romantic or overkill?). Fizzy cocktails will sparkle when you sip them—I thought you' d get a kick out of that! Holo- Risians will dance around horga' hns—don' t worry, not that kind of night, just a festive vibe!

Surprises include glittery rain or holo- fireflies—maybe we' ll even sneak in a hand- holding moment? No pressure though! Humans are like comets, and I' m still learning your orbit. I want us to laugh together, maybe share a peaceful holo- ocean moment, and create a beautiful memory. How about we meet at Holodeck 3 at 1900 hours? 0 hours?

Todd

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Maggie laughed when Todd's message came across her PADD. They were dating regularly, but here he was acting like a teenager! She shook her head, but sent him a reply back.

"Yes, sounds good. See you then. You BETTER not be wearing a uniform."

She hit send, and then continued her final checks of the shuttle. Everything looked good, and so she took some time to plan out her outfit in her head.


- Todds Quarters –

Todd smiled at Maggie’s reply on his PADD, his fingers playfully tapping out a quick, cheeky response:

“Uniform? Nah, I’m going full civilian—You’re not planning on outshining me, right? Can't wait to see you!”

Hewitt then hit send and got to work. Standing before the mirror, he trimmed his hair precisely, snipped a few stray nose hairs, and gave his stubborn stubble a clean swipe. A cold shower woke him up, the chill sharpening his senses. He slathered on lotion, swiped deodorant, and finished with a spritz of Polo Blue cologne—crisp and clean. Reaching for his antique silver wristwatch, a hefty analog heirloom passed down through generations of Hewitt men, he snapped it on, its weight grounding him.

Sliding into his warm grey USS Tomcat hoodie, loose cargo shorts, and well-worn Birkenstocks, he checked himself in the mirror. Casual but deliberate. Ready for Maggie.

Todd placed on his Toronto Maple Leafs NHL ballcap.

- Maggie’s Quarters –

She laughed reading his note. Of COURSE she was going to outshine him. That's what she did!! Quickly, though, she took a sonic shower, brushed out her blonde hair, and stepped into a white sundress that showed off everything she wanted-and more, too. She put some heeled sandals on, and then found her large bag, where she put a bottle of white bubbly wine, some of her personal items, a PADD (just in case), and her bikini.

After she put on a little makeup and jewelry, she sent him a message that she was ready, finally.

Holodeck - Starbase

Todd shifted nervously at the holodeck entrance, feeling the warm breeze from the Risian beach ruffle his hoodie. The sky shimmered in pink and purple hues, sand sparkling beneath his feet, while holo-Risians laughed and drummed in the distance. His heart raced, part nerves and his excitement, as he adjusted his Maple Leaf cap, suddenly anxious that his shorts and old sandals appeared too casual.

When the doors slid open, Maggie walked in, her white sundress catching the light, her blonde hair swaying gracefully. She looked breathtaking. Todd’s mouth dropped open, and a goofy, teenage grin spread across his face. “Mags! WOW!! You look amazing!” he exclaimed.

Todd’s smile broadened as he advanced, his sandals sinking into the glowing sand. “C’mon, Mags, Welcome to my version of Risa. Let’s get started!” he said, bubbling with excitement, awkwardly offered her his arm, radiating genuine enthusiasm.

Maggie smiled big. "Alright," she said, taking his arm. "I am ready," she said. "What happens?" She asked him. She was excited to learn more about his culture. Soon, it would be part of hers, too.

Todd led Maggie along the sparkling beach, the sun of Risa casting a warm glow over the clear blue waves. “Mags, this paradise is completely ours. We can swim in that lagoon, sip cocktails at the tiki bar, or dance to the sound of the steel drums!” Todd inhaled deeply, feeling relaxed. “It’s all about what brings us joy. You choose first!” His voice brimmed with affection as he linked his arm with hers. Glancing down at their hands, he whispered, “Wow,” his heart racing at the idea of marriage with someone as kind and beautiful as Maggie.


"OOH!" She squealed. "Let's see. A swim and a drink first!!" She said. "Is there a place where I can change into my swimsuit?" She asked. Yeah, they were alone in a hologram, but still. "Or is it a Risa nude beach situation?" She asked.

Todd’s eyes widened at Maggie’s playful question, a nervous chuckle escaping as he rubbed the back of his neck under his Maple Leafs cap. “Nude beach? Ha, not quite my style Mags!” He said a slight blush coloring his cheeks. “I mean it’s Risa, so I could program it that way, but… let’s keep it chill.” Todd flashed a grin, clearly smitten but trying to play it cool.

He gestured toward a nearby cluster of palm trees where a small, open-air cabana stood, its colorful curtains fluttering in the holo-breeze. “There’s a changing area right there-fancy Risian style, with all the privacy you need. I’ll wait here and guard the sand,” Hewitt teased, playfully kicking at the glowing grains with his sandal. “Take your time, and when you’re ready, we’ll hit the lagoon for a swim. The water’s perfect, I promise.”

Maggie laughed. "I was teasing!! Calm down!" She said. She made her way to the cabana to put on her bikini and get ready.

While Maggie changed, Todd steadied his nerves, glancing at the shimmering lagoon. The holo-Risians twirled around a horga’hn statue, their laughter blending with soft steel drum music. He adjusted his hoodie, suddenly wondering if he should’ve packed a swimsuit too. “Okay, Hewitt, don’t overthink it.”

When Maggie emerged, Todd’s jaw dropped again. Her vibrant bikini perfectly matched the Risian vibe, and her confidence shone as she walked back. Todd beamed. “Mags, you’re gonna make the holo-sun jealous!” he stated, his voice brimming with admiration. “Ready for that swim? The lagoon’s got cool little holo-fish that glow when you splash. Oh! and the tiki bars got those fizzy cocktails I told you about-your call on what’s next!

"Drinks!" She said. "Then we swim a bit!" She said. She smiled and leaned in to kiss him. "This is fun," she said.

Todd was already sporting some grooves on the way over to the bar in the sand, as the loud thumping of the techno dance stage flashed lights across the risean beach at sunset.

Twisting, raising his hands up back and forth, he began jumping to the beat as the generators pulsed out, thud, thumping new hammerings… It was loud…

“Ohhhhhh My GOD that’s Loud!!” Todd had the holodeck turn down the techno as they reached the Bar.

“What drink do you like? You're not beer. You're not wine. I bet you're on a beach. Are you going to get something frosty?” Todd asked curiously as his soon-to-be wife revealed herself to him, her interests, and her tastes. Every day was exciting with Maggie.

She laughed. "Of course!! We're on the BEACH, Todd," she said. She turned to the bartender. "An Adorian Colada, please," she said. She leaned against Todd's shoulder. "What about you?" She asked him. She smiled. She was happy here, with him. She loved this man, even if it was maddening how he'd gotten under her skin. She hadn't meant to fall in love, after all.

Todd, lanky and grinning, leaned against the bar, holographic waves crashing in the background. He caught Maggie’s smile, his heart flipping as it always did when she laughed. “An Adorian Colada, huh? Fancy, Mags! I shoulda known you’d go for something with a little zing,” he teased, mimicking a tiny explosion.

Hewitt turned to the bartender, scratching his chin. “Me? I’m keeping it classic. Gimme a Guinness Ice, no foam, more alcohol! With a splash of that Bajoran syrup — you know, the one that tastes like sex and sunrise.” He winked at Maggie, his arm around her waist.

Todd’s grin softened, his eyes locking onto Maggie’s with mischief and adoration. The holographic beach hummed around them, warm and salty, but all he saw was her.

He leaned in, cupping her cheek, bending to close the distance. “Mags,” Todd murmured, voice low and charming, “you’re gonna be the death of me.” Then he kissed her—passionate, unhurried, pouring his love into it, savoring her. When he finally pulled back, just an inch, his forehead rested against hers, a goofy smile breaking through. He had lived for 100 years, but today he truly felt alive…

Maggie really WAS having a good time. She was happy, too. Around Todd, she didn't have to be anything except herself-he liked her as she was, and that was new and different, but nice. She pressed herself against him as he kissed her, and when he pulled away, she let her eyes stay closed for a moment, savoring the moment and the taste of him.

"mmm," she murmured. She didn't want to let go.

Todd stood there, holding Maggie, and then whispered awkwardly in her ear, his voice like that of a 100-year-old Virgin El-Aurian. "It's happened again..." He hesitated, his long beach shorts tenting out, and fast! He blushed, looking at Maggie.

"Screw it!!!!!" Todd barked.

He grabbed their drinks, barely finished, and rushed off in a frantic dash, a burst of serendipity leading Maggie along... The sunset cast a warm, orange glow over the ocean beach, and Todd ran… His athletic legs propelled him forward as he jumped over sunbathers, laughing.

Reaching the outer tropical moonlight filtering through the flora secluding the lagoon… he turned, holding Maggie at her side. "I want us to be naked in a warm lagoon, just ourselves!"

Hewitt then ordered the computer to ‘clear out!!’ the other swimmers, leaving only the two of them. Maggie, he smiled, handing her a drink with a gentle kiss to her forehead now. “We have so many firsts... I cherish this." Todd was beaming with pride.

She laughed some more as Todd grabbed their drinks and began to run towards the lagoon. She followed, but took a slightly different, more ladylike path. Soon, she arrived at his side, slightly out of breath.

"Me, too," she said, and then kissed him. "Let's go skinny dip!!' She said, pulling off her bikini top and bottoms, then racing for the water. "Put the drinks down!" She called out behind her.

His eyes widened as Maggie shed her bikini with effortless confidence, her silhouette glowing against the secluded forest’s dappled moonlight. “Whoa, Maggie!” Todd laughed, his voice brimming with nervous excitement, fumbling to set the drinks down on a nearby rock as she sprinted toward the shimmering lake.

His virgin eyes, unaccustomed to such uninhibited freedom, followed her every move. Maggie's lithe form cut through the warm air, her laughter echoing in the secluded lagoon, just the two of them.

“Okay, okay, I’m coming!” Hewitt shouted. His clothes were discarded in a clumsy rush, his cheeks flushed with exhilaration as he chased after his lover. He made a sharp dive into the waist-high, blue shimmering water, suddenly reappearing behind Maggie.

Maggie was laughing as she teased him gently, running for the water. THIS was what she liked best-carefree and uninhibited by the reality of day to day life. Her work was hard, even though most people thought the pilots were pretty charmed. But she wasn't lazy-she was always on practice runs, making sure that she remained deft and skilled. She couldn't AFFORD not to be serious at work-lives were at stake, most importantly her own.

She heard Todd jump into the water behind her, and then turned around to pull him close. "Hi,' she said. "This just got a whole lot funner," she said.

Hewitt’s grin flashed in the moonlight, his heart pounding as he closed the distance between them in the warm, shimmering water. “Funner, huh?” he teased, his voice low and dripping with playful bravado. “Oh, Maggie, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet.”

He couldn’t resist her—her wild, carefree energy was like a spark to his kindling. With a swift, confident move, he wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling his soon-to-be wife close, their wet skin brushing in the lagoon’s gentle ripples.

Before she could toss another classic Maggie quip his way, he leaned in, planting an intense, passionate kiss on her lips, his hands firm on her back, pulling Maggie almost into him, savoring them. He pulled back just enough to catch her baby blues, his eyes glinting with mischief... “Now that’s how you start an unforgettable night, darlin’.” Todd gruffed cockily with testosterone pumping full.

Maggie giggled lightly and nipped Todd's lower lip gently as he kissed her. When they pulled away, she smiled. "Indeed," she said. She moved her hands over his body, teasingly, and then ducked out of his grasp. "Swim with me for a bit!" She said, taking off so he could chase her. Not far...

Todd's eyes slowly followed Maggie, gliding through the gentle, shimmering lagoon with deliberate ease. "Gonna make me work for it, huh?" he teased, keeping just a few strokes behind Maggie, letting her lead the playful chase in the moonlight, the sound of the music in the distance.

"Of course!" She stopped under a rock formation where a waterfall came out to spray a sheet of rain-like water into the lagoon. She reached out and grabbed Todd before kissing him passionately.

Todd was surprised by the kiss under the waterfalls, as his senses became entangled with Maggie's, his body craving every moment of tasting her... He was for a moment under the showers, falling, and his lips were locked at the same time. He felt as though he was in a completely different world. A world of happiness. Maggie was his happiness!

She closed her eyes, and let herself feel him. It was nice...she hadn't opened up to many people but Todd had somehow gotten to her. When they broke the kiss, she smiled and giggled a little bit. "What's on your mind?" She asked him.

Todd opened his eyes, as if from a dream. The sound of the loud rushing water hard to hear maggie, but he placed her forehead to his, as he grinned eyes locked leaned in to Maggies...

"I thought of YOU, Silly!" He shook his head. She didn't get it. "You can let your guard down, now. I promise you. I promise you that, I won't hurt you." Not to add that it was almost a capital crime to break another El-Aurians heart since they grew together. His eyes stared knowingly in to Maggies.

Maggie smiled. "I thought of YOU..." she said. She sighed.

"I know. I trust you." It was true. He would know how much it was for to say that. "I am excited to spend my life with you," she said.

As weird as it was, she was very much excited and desperately in love with Todd Hewitt.

Todd tickled Maggie. She was being all serious. To Todd that was a waste of time, worrying or being too serious of things. However, work with Starfleet was completely opposite. He worried about everything in Engineering! He was an Engineer and he was hoping to one day be his own Chief. Hewitt was learning a lot from Leland. He wanted to grow old with Maggie. Todd would take the aging serum now available to El Aurians. He wanted Maggie to be his one and only.

Todd kissed Maggie and held her.

She kissed him back again. "OK. More swimming, or something else?" She asked him.

[Beachside] [Evening]
[Fireside]

The fire’s crackling, spitting sparks that float up like they’re trying to join the stars. Algonquin Park, Todd called it, this place I stumbled into after days of running, where the beach stretches out like a flat hand holding the lake still. Water’s lapping soft against the shore, and the air smells of wet sand and pine and smoke. It’s quiet, except for the fire and the waves.

We’re sitting on this scratchy blanket, she and I, pulled tight around our shoulders. Big logs circle the fire, half-buried in the sand, and they’re warm from the flames. Maggie’s close, her arm brushing mine.

“There!” he says, pointing, and a star shoots across the sky, a quick slash of light, gone before I can blink. “Make a wish, Maggie.”

Maggie thought for a moment. She didn't need to think long, though. Because she only had one wish today-to spend as much time with Todd as possible. She smiled, and leaned over. "My only wish is to be with you forever," she whispered.

Hewitt looked back at Maggie as he lay her head on his chest and shoulder. Hewitt leaned back in his spot near the fireside, letting his Mags relax and embrace him for more comfort, more support. "Here... Here..." Hewitt helped her lean up properly and close.... "There we go..." He wrapped the blanket around Maggie as they now looked close in the firelight at each other...

She giggled, but leaned into him. This was SOO nice. "So. When do we want to do it?" She asked him.

"Do it." Todd was confused at first. "Ohhhhhh..... " His catching on slowly led to a hand slipping through the blanket and gently placed at Maggies side cheek, Todd let his thumb rub at her softness. "You are so beautiful." He leaned slowly in to a solid kiss, solidifying his once again horniness character.

"I... Want to Fuck You." Hewitt, crouching topped Maggie as he lay her back on the blanket, the warmth, the darkness, the moon light all flickering in the shadows, that defined the now naked chest of Todd, and slipping up and off torrid Maggie's top.... Todd, no longer a virgin, now with more urgency, more sexual tension, removing Maggies short shorts and laced panties along down to bare ankles on the sandy blanket. Todd slipping out of his shorts and boxers as he ceremoniously took both hips side by side, and hoisting Maggie right up to meeting Todd's missionary, as he slowly then grunts, closing his eyes, and leaning forward as Maggie felt herself being penetrated, this time with Todd pulsing, engoring and rooting for his Baby. Todd was now addicted to Fuck. He was addicted to Fuck Maggie!

"UUuuuunnnnnnNNNNhhhh..." The El-Aurian moaned out as he felt himself being engulfed between them, Maggie accepting as she lay with amber shadows showing glints of her facial reaction....

Maggie had meant the wedding but this was OK too! She lay back gently, and let him begin. She let out a small gasp of pleasure when he entered her.

"Mmmm....Todd," she opened her eyes to gaze lovingly into his. "I love you..." She whispered.

Todd moaned as he continued to look into Maggie's eyes, focusing on every facet for clues as to how he was affecting her, fucking his Wife to be and hearing those words. Hewitt truly felt those feelings for Maggie as well. It was only a matter of time before his own El-Aurian vocabulary would proclaim it as well…

Todd's butt flexing paced thrusts now, thighs, knees anchored into the sandy blankets, the sound of the crackling beach fire, and flickering of the flames on Maggie's naked body as Hewitt focused. His eyes nearly rolling to the back of his head, as he felt himself fully engulfed, after moments of gentle penetration to Maggie, till he hit the hilt of his base to Maggie's love bun. The virgin El-Aurian was taking considerable efforts not to explode!

Flushing, Hewitt leaned atop of Maggie laying there, accepting Todd’s rather sizeable member that El-Aurians were graced with… “SSs hh uuuGghhhhhhhhhhhh!!” He breathed, attempting to stave off these incredible sensations, wanting him to go to town and burst himself. But Maggie deserved gentleness, loving tenderness…

“Iiii love youu, Maggie.” Todd gasped, placing a deep, passionate tongue kiss, taking control of her mouth now, too. Below Maggie's warmth, her tightness urging his member to slow down and savor her tenderness, Maggie's body was a temple.

The rhythm of sex, the rhythm set by Todd, began laboured, more earnest, a slipping of gentle pacing into a pure wash of torrid fuck as his thighs tightened and relaxed his cheeky bum now thrusting with earnest, Maggie's ankles bent back by Todd, taking her as deep as he could… His eyes were full moon like a wolf in heat as he eyed Maggie, never breaking…

She let out a soft groan of pleasure as he entered her. She shut her eyes, as well, just letting herself FEEL something for once. She had kept herself walled out to most people-mostly as a coping mechanism to hide her insecurities. But not with Todd. He got her as she was-flaws and all. She could be herself with him, and that was nice. "Mmmm," she murmured, and opened her eyes again. "Yes..." she bit her lip but couldn't help the need to scream out.

Todd's breath hitched, ragged and uneven, as the heat coiled tighter in his core, every thrust into Maggie's welcoming depths pushing him closer to the edge. Her walls clenched around him like a velvet vice, milking him, urging him on with that perfect, intoxicating grip. "Maggie... oh fuck, Maggie," he growled low in his throat, his voice breaking into a husky rasp, sweat beading on his brow as he drove deeper, harder, the slap of skin against skin echoing in the room like a primal drumbeat.

He could feel it building, that white-hot surge, his balls tightening, his cock throbbing inside her. "I... I can't hold back anymore," he panted, his hips snapping forward with desperate fervor, burying himself to the hilt each time. His hands gripped her thighs, fingers digging in just enough to leave faint marks, anchoring him as the world narrowed to just her—her moans, her scent, the way her body arched to meet his. "You're mine... all mine... gonna fill you up, baby..."

With a guttural roar that tore from his chest, Todd shattered, his release exploding in powerful jets deep inside her, pulsing waves of ecstasy that made his vision blur and his muscles quake. He collapsed forward, still buried in her, lips crashing against hers in a messy, fervent kiss as he rode out the aftershocks...

She let out a loud scream of delight as they moved together as one, thrusting her hips along with Todd's. As she reached her crescendo, she let out a few moans.

"I love you, Todd Hewitt," she said, in a whisper. She couldn't help it; she was entranced by this man and the things he did to her. "Fill me up!" She said, a little louder, as she felt him nearing his own end.

Her words ignited something primal in him, a fierce possession that made his spent cock twitch yet again, one last thrust that squeezed his cheeks, draining inside her, drawing one last shuddering pulse from deep within. Todd's breath came in ragged gasps against her lips, his forehead pressed to hers, sweat-slicked skin sliding together as he held her close—too close, like he'd never let go. "God, Maggie," he murmured, her name a broken prayer on his tongue, laced with that raw Noise in his head, the chaos of his thoughts spilling over into the quiet: love you, need you, mine forever.

He shifted just enough to ease the ache in his arms, rolling them sideways so she was cradled against his chest, his hand over the curve of her hip where his fingers had marked her. "You... you're gonna be the death of me, girl," he teased, voice husky, nuzzling into the crook of her neck to inhale her scent, committing it to memory like it was the only thing keeping him grounded in this war-torn world.

Hewitt pulled her tighter, lips brushing her temple. "I love you too. More than anything. And yeah... filled you up, didn't I?” He cockily grunted. “Now rest.”


Maggie closed her eyes and arched her back as Todd finished. "Oh, GODS," she called out. As they parted, she sighed deeply, and lay back. "Yes, you did," she said. She moved her hands towards him and pulled him close. She rested her head on his bare chest. "That was...so good."

Lying there in the firelight. Hewitt spooned Maggie from behind, holding her close to him for warmth, both feeling their heartbeats come down from their crescendo.

Todd, with an ever-content face as he snuggled into Maggie's neck, wrapped his forearms around her shorter body, his larger size dwarfing hers. "DammmmnnnnNN.... I needed you."

"I needed you," she said, contently. And did she ever. She hadn't expected it or planned it. It had just happened...and though she'd tried to fight it at first, she was now fully and irreparably in love with Todd Hewitt.

As she drifted off to snooze a while, she moved in closer to him, as if trying to meld their bodies together. "We should have a baby," she murmured, absently. It was probably definitely the dopamine, but she wanted to be tied to him forever and she wasn't very good at feelings, anyway.

Todd's breath hitched against her skin, his arms tightening like he was afraid she'd slip away. A baby? The word sparked something wild and terrifying in his Noise. Images of tiny hands, futures he never dared dream. But mostly, just Maggie, forever. He pressed a lazy kiss to her pulse, voice rough with sleep and that bone-deep want. "Yeah... yeah, we should. Make it real." He contentedly, tiredly smiled.


End.

 

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